AY: Group Development 3/12/13

Today we worked collaboratively to edit the video and decide which filler shots to include in the chorus. We also added a slow track in on the chorus when Dan is sitting on the bench as it is too static.
We showed our video to Mrs Fernandez and this is the feedback she gave us:

• The jump cut at the beginning looks odd as it only happens once in this begin sequence
• The shot of Dan exiting the house is still too long
• More needs to happen in the chorus, for example you could have more flashing images cut into the static shots to create more discordance
• I think you should add in more lyrics to create a theme throughout the song but be sure not to over do it
• For the bridge and final chorus your cutting rate needs to be much faster to create a crescendo into the end of the song
• Make sure you carefully select the clips that you want to use in the reverse sequence and choose shots/lyrics to cut into the clip to make it more interesting

We have decided to all stay at lunch to continue editing and amend the video where possible